darken house
I can’t breath
You immobilized me
Go outside
he can’t defeat you there
My legs feel like lead
God give me strength
I have faith
Dark blue skies
Lighting striking close by
The figure shows himself
I can’t breath
I can’t move
I’ve seen him before
No please! I thought you were gone
No please! I hate you go away
He laughs and gets near
I pray and feel weak
The horns and tails
coming close and snatching
my weaken soul
“I told you I’ll come back”
“keep praying what is it doing”
” I pray myself, don’t you remember I’m the fallen Angel”
He cackles in my face
I wake up cold sweat all over
I see in the darkness
The face with the horns
laughing at me
Hes come once again
A Muslim Latina 
This is a great poem! Could you give some comments on my poem? https://miraclestonight.wordpress.com/angelic-demons/
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I sure will! Thank you and I’m glad you liked it! 🙂
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I used to have night terrors and then Jesus came to me and I can sleep in sweet peace, my days full of Joy and God pouring Love into my heart, an actual substance I had never known in the world. May God bless you, protect you and provide all your needs abundantly.
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Thank for your thoughts, I’m glad that you have found your faith.
My poem is not a night terror just a piece that I wrote..
Thank you for your comment and well wishes.
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Oh, forgive me! I thought you were literally speaking of being visited by a demonic presence! May you be blessed!
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No worries ma’am, Thank you for being kind and giving words of comfort.
I do apologize if this seemed real in anyway… Maybe next time I will make sure I put a clause on the article itself that is is fiction…
My mind sometimes has a very vivid dark side for some reason and I sometimes do use life experiences to be able to create the emotions that you see here… Doesn’t work a lot of times but sometimes I get a good piece..
Again I’m happy that you have found God and no longer suffer from night terrors. I’ve heard those are very hard on a person, physically, mentally and emotionally.
Insha’Allah your love and relationship with God (SWT) continues to grow and he may give you many peaceful and beautiful nights. Ameen.
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Strong imagery … Quite scary actually.. Good job!
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Thank you 🙂
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this is haunting and immediate – I imagine a dream recall, well done! 🙂
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Thank you very much! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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